http://shyarianna.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Sun, 14 Jun 2009 00:38:25 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 http://shyarianna.edublogs.org/2009/06/12/shooting-an-elephant/comment-page-1/#comment-3 shyarianna Sun, 14 Jun 2009 00:38:25 +0000 http://shyarianna.edublogs.org/?p=35#comment-3 Oh okay... thanks! So what's my grade for it? Oh okay… thanks! So what’s my grade for it?

]]> http://shyarianna.edublogs.org/2009/06/12/shooting-an-elephant/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Giddings Sun, 14 Jun 2009 00:14:10 +0000 http://shyarianna.edublogs.org/?p=35#comment-2 Not too bad, though the conventions are poor (never us "&" in place of "and" in a formal paper) and your tone falls apart in the last paragraph or so. The argument and support is pretty solid for the most part. It just needs some polishing of the rough edges. Not too bad, though the conventions are poor (never us “&” in place of “and” in a formal paper) and your tone falls apart in the last paragraph or so. The argument and support is pretty solid for the most part. It just needs some polishing of the rough edges.

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